Dramatic Poetry: Love Ends With Hope

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By DarkMuse13

His and her toothbrushes
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A new extra firm pillow never used,
the three liter of Dr. Chill
waiting to be opened;
bought for you and you alone,
but you are not here.

Your shoes no longer sit by my door;
Your tea pot does not occupy my stove.
You took everything that was used
except for your toothbrush.
It still stands next to mine
keeping it company.

Why not just throw it away
while you were clearing things out?
Why leave it for me to see
and remember you, every night
you are not here with me?

I got a bag of mixed jelly beans
taped to my door the other day.

I took it inside

thinking you would love them
when you come back
for your toothbrush.


Published in Sunflowers and Seashells: Summer Blues

© All rights reserved to Christine Buenemann, 2010-12

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Rosemay50 Level 8 Commenter 3 months ago

Lovely poem but very sad. I would have thrown the toothbrush out.

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DarkMuse13 Hub Author 3 months ago

I eventually did, when he made it clear he wasn't coming back. This was written less than a week after the break-up.

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Rosemay50 Level 8 Commenter 3 months ago

I just noticed you only joined 4 days ago, so welcome to HP.

I hope you are getting over him now. :)

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htodd 3 months ago

Thanks for the nice and interesting post..Great read

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DarkMuse13 Hub Author 3 months ago

I am over him and moved on to a much better guy. Just thought I'd share in case others could relate.

Devineseer 3 months ago

Glad you moved on! He wasn't worth it.

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theking2020 3 months ago

Great poetry.

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billybuc Level 8 Commenter 2 months ago

So much talent in one so young. It's going to be enjoyable following your progress and watching you grow.

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DarkMuse13 Hub Author 2 months ago

Thank you very much. I've always wanted to go into writing, if not myself, to inspire or help others. I'm just happy to see that people are enjoying my work. That's what it is all about ^_^

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